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Prestige television · Season 2 · cold open

Ghosts of Pottawatomie Creek

A four-season historical drama about John Brown and the Bleeding Kansas period. Three seasons are drafted in full — roughly 1,300 pages across 26 episodes. Below is the cold open of Season 2, Episode 1, “The Household.”

S02E01 — “The Household” Cold open Three seasons drafted

COLD OPEN

EXT. BROWN BARN, POTTAWATOMIE CREEK — PRE-DAWN

Dark. Wind against wood. A lantern catches. Flame steadies. JOHN BROWN SR. (55, lean, gray-bearded, the posture of a man who believes he is being watched by God) sets the lantern on a workbench.

His breath clouds in the cold. His hands are bare. On the bench: a broadsword. Blade flat. Edge exposed. The steel is old. The handle wrapped in leather.

Behind him, pinned to the wall: a map. Ink circles along a creek. Names. Precise. Deliberate. The circles do not overlap. Each one is centered on a cabin.

Brown picks up a whetstone. He draws it along the edge. Stone on steel. The sound fills the barn. His hands are steady. His breathing is even. He works in silence.

The stone moves. The blade turns. He checks the edge with his thumb. The thumb does not bleed. The blade is ready. He sets the broadsword down. Picks up another.

Repeats. The lantern throws his shadow against the map. The circles are dark. The names are dark. The hand that drew them was sure. He checks the second blade.

Satisfied. He lays the broadswords on a cloth. He folds the cloth over them. One fold. Two. The edges meet. He blows out the lantern. The barn goes dark.

EXT. BROWN CABIN, POTTAWATOMIE CREEK — DAWN

Brown walks from the barn to the cabin. Fifty yards. Frozen grass under his boots. His breath in clouds. The sky gray behind the trees. The creek somewhere in the trees — the sound of water over stones, distant.

He opens the cabin door. Inside: warmth. The smell of food. A stove burning. MARY ANN DAY BROWN (38, worn, durable, working hands) at the stove. Her back to the door.

She does not turn. ANNIE BROWN (13, hair pinned, a stone in her pocket) setting the table. Four plates. Five. Six. She counts as she sets them. Her lips move.

YOUNGER BROWN CHILDREN at the bench. Two of them. Bare feet on the cold floor. The youngest pushing a spoon against the table. Brown sits at the head of the table.

The Bible is there. Open. He does not look at it yet. His hands flat on the wood. Mary serves. Porridge. Bread. Coffee. She moves between the stove and the table without looking at her husband.

The movement is practiced. Twenty years of it. Her apron dusty at the hem. Her hands red from the wash water. Brown bows his head. BROWN The Lord bless thee and keep thee.

The household prays. Silence. The stove ticks. The wind against the cabin wall. Title card: "Kansas Territory. January 1856."

FADE TO:

TITLE SEQUENCE

End of cold open. Full scripts available to credentialed outlets and studio partners on request.